My opinion on blogging

Well, at first when we got this exercise to make a blog and every week write a post was not interesting for me. But after yes. I don't like to write about what we must to write, because sometime we got a topic which isn't interested me and then I don't know what could I write. I think this is a good practise the English language, but I worried because I make a lot of mistakes in my writing and it is unconfused so everyone could see my mistakes...

A Formal Letter

3 Bratstva-Jedintsva

Rusko Selo, 23314

October 14, 2012

Dear Sir / Madam,

   I am writing to ask for more information about the ’ diving course in the Red Sea ’ which I saw advertised on your webpage. My friend and I are both high school students. We are interested in the diving holiday but I would like some more details.

   Firstly, I would like to know more about the accomodation. Could you tell me more about it? Do you think I could share the room with my friend? What sort of accommodation do you provide?

   Secondly, I am slightly worried as I have never been on a diving course. Could you possibly tell me about the shark threat? What could we do if we saw a shark? I would also be grateful if you could give me information about the equipment? I would like to know where could I obtain it and how long stay we in the water. I would like to reserve a place, provided that the safety of the course can be guaranteed.

   Thirdly, could you please tell me what is included in the price. Could you give me more information about the flights? I would like to fly from Budapest, if possible.

   I look forward to hearing from you.

  Yours faithfully,

  Rita Talpai

Valentine’s day

The day of love is at 14th of february. For them who is in love that is the nice feast. They can show each other how they love. They make programmes together. That is one day, and who is sweetie not only this day loves his/her flame, but it is a symbol to show each other how much they love. Now I have a boyfriend and this year was unforgettable the Valentine’s day, but when I haven’t got, this was only a simple day. 

Discursive essay

Smoking

     I think, that everybody had seen a cigarette and I musn’t have to demonostrate. In the box of cigarette is written: smoking kills. Why is it in the box? At the one leght is the burn zone it is 1000°C, where we light the cigarette, here arose the smoke, with cigarette stub like a 2l smoke. The other leght is the filter. The smoke 1/3 strain the filter and because of that 1/9 smoke get into the smoker and 2/3 inspire to the environment.

    On the one hand the cigarette is harmful. It bring on a many disease. Despite knowing the dangers, many people still smoke.  For example lung cancer, laryngeal cancer, throat cancer, infartus, stroke, oral cancer, gum disease, spontaneous abortion, accelerates the aging process, yellow fingers, scruffy yellow teeth etc. Everyone who live in the smoky environment is passive smoker. Althoug we know, that the smoking is expensive we use it. If we don’t smoke, we will spare x amount of money for the other activities such as swimming, sport, family. Who smoke quickly get tired.

    Why the smoking is so popular? On the other hand many people and teenagers like it, because of the aroma of smoke, they can blow smoke rings, they feel after fresher but especially due to the company’s. It is difficult to refuse the cigarette when someone offers you. If someone feels nervous, burns a cigarette and it increasse the happiness hormone, love hormone. After that she is satisfied and calm.

    No cigarette is harmless. All things cosidered, we are responsible for our health. We must decided how many years we will live, and will we want to see how growing up our grandchild. 

A letter of Application

Dear Sir/Madam,

    I am writing in connection with the appeal in today’s poverty. According to the appeal, you are looking for volunteers to help children who have a bad life. Although I am not a professional, I would like to volunteer.

     I am 17-year-old student. My mum is a teacher in our town. I very love children and one day I went with her to check out her class. I love to play with them, help when someting they do not understand. Last year I was at one camp where were many children whom had to take care of and deal with them. Children also love me. At mum’s class was one boy, who has not got a winter jacket, however outside was very cold. I asked my mum why is that? She told me his life. He has an older brother who is visionless and his treat of is very expensive. Sometimes the little boy can not come to school, can not read, draw because his mum must to look after his another son and has not got time his smaller son.

       Due to pro my school learning, I could deal with him. I could every day keep him to school and afrer school play with him. I do not know if I have any of the specialised skills that you need. I think I could help him in learning. Such as reading, counting, drawing because he has a very baby’s drawing. In addition, I could also do some housework.

        To sum up, I would be very happy if I can be of some help. I would be grateful if you could send me futher details. I could provide referencesif these are needed.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely,

Rita Talpai

A book review

The two Lotte

The two Lotte was written by Erich Kastner. It is set in 1949. At first it was scandalous, because at that time it wasn’t usual to discuss divorce. Children know and love his works. It won the best screen-play prise in 1951.

Who does not want a twin? A sister who looks the same. This novel is based on a story about a pretty pair of twins, who are separated from each other, because their parents get divorced. Both of them go to the same camp-site, where they met each other. Luise is on a vacation their with her friends, when the bus arrives. From the bus comes down a girl looking just the same as Luise. The governesses schoked, when saw them. Only their hair was different. First Luise and their friend wanted to excommunicate the new girl, Lotte. After Luise realizes, that in they life have something in common, she has only a father, Lotte has only a mother. The story starts after they have noticed that they are twins. They wanted to change each other. That their parents has not recognize that they are not who was before, they must learn about everything from each other. Lotte has gone to Vienna to get acquainted with her father, Luise has gone to Munich for her mother. The parents do not notice the change. Their father beginnes to compose a new opera for children and he gives piano lessons to her daughter. Love between Ms Gerlach and her father flare up the love. Lotte went to Gerlach hause and said her to let alone her father but she throws out Lotte, and Lotte gets sick. Immediately their mother was working in editorial office she saw the picture about the girls which has made in camp. Luise avow everything, they were going to Vienna, Lotte feels better and in the end the parents make it up with each other and become a family again.

The film is very realistic in the way that it shows us the family where the parents are divorced and what feelings have than their children have. Both parents are important for childrens. It is about the  everyday life. When we met a person in our life who looks like the same as us, at the first we ail, after admit to that it is not bad.

All things considered, The two Lotte is a real masterpiece book for childrens. It speaks to childrens. When my mother was a child the fashion was thise dotted books and she told me about them. I have read most of  thise dotted books, but this was the best. 

A letter of Complaint

Dear Sir/Madam,

    I am writing to you about a swimming pool which I bought from Shop Mania on 16 June 2012 for $9.990. I enclose copies of the guarantee and the receipt.

     In your advertising, you claim that by using the filter, the water would be clean. We have been using the filter and now it seems as though the water hadn’t changed, moreover, it has become dirtier.

     The foil is also badly worked. It tears after a heavy rain and it’s ruined. We have to release the water and fill it again the next day since it was full of leaves. We were so worried because we were having a party the next day and the water was filthy. We were working so quickly as we had only 5 hours to drain the water and then fill the pool again. We had finished all just as the guests came.

     When I took the filter back to the shop, not only did the assistant refuse to refund my money, but she also said that it was my fault and I didn’t read the instructions carefully.

    I would like you to refund my money as soon as possible. Unless I receive a satisfactory reply, I will write to the Consumer Association.

    I look forward to hearing from you.

   Yours faithfully,

M. Jane