Dear Madam,
    I have just read the article which you have sent for me tonight. I am writing to ask for more information about the 'it's a student life' by English in Action writer, James Faraday. Where have you found this? It has really dissapointed me so I would like to say something about it.
    Firstly, I must say that the real truth is somewhere elese, because there are students who have a part-time job when they don't learn. They help their parents when they are at home or look for another jobpossibility in order to earn more money. They would able, of course, to say something about the value of the money they earn.
    Secondly, I am slightly persuade as many of students are learning to get good marks, because if the grade point average is good they may obtain a scholarship. If they get a scholarship it's a great help for their parents.
    Thirdly, it isn't true that student do nothing, that they are lazy, they inly sit around all day listening to CD's and spending their parents' hard-eared money. It's just partly true. If they spend money buying things that are not important that's the problem but if they buy what is really necessary, than it's ok. They are students and must have free time when they can do whatever they want.
    I look forward to hearing from you.
    Yours faithfully,
              Ms Rita